I wrote this for school and i actually liked writing it. So here it is.
One ordinary day in Greeley, Colorado, the police have just called the N to save the day from the evil genius M who was robbing one of three banks in Greeley. That’s usually what he is doing, robbing some bank somewhere.
No one knew why the N was called the N. It was just what was on the front of his shirt. Same thing with the evil genius M. It was only the letter on the front of his shirt. No one knew what the letters stand for, but they thought that some day they would know.
Later on that day, Mark came over to play video games at Nathan’s house. Sometimes it seems all they do is play video games. Mark is nineteen and Nathan is twenty. In a couple of days it will be Mark’s birthday so they will both be twenty.
At the evil M’s evil lair, the evil M is making a big plan with the evil D. We all know what the D on the front of his shirt stands for…evil Dad. The evil M and the evil D are coming up with an evil plan for evil M’s birthday, which is in a couple of days. The evil D is making a huge, green, slimy monster thing to take over Greeley. Their plan is that the evil M will rob a bank and then somebody will call for help, the N will come to save the day. While all that is happening the evil D will release his huge, green, slimy monster that there is no way to kill. The huge monster will eat everybody in Greeley. Then the evil M will shut the green monster off.
The evil D came up with this plan for the evil M’s birthday, which was in a couple of days. The evil D told the evil M the plan and he really liked it.
There was a new bank in Greeley. He decided to try to rob that bank for their plan. The evil M wanted to try to rob it before his birthday to check out the security system.
The evil M went to go rob the new bank. He figured out their security system wasn’t very good, but the N showed up. They had a little fight as usual and then the M got up and jumped through the window.
The evil M dropped his wallet in the fight and the N picked it up Then looked through his wallet but all he found was a credit card. The N thought he could go buy something with the credit card and the name of the villain would show up on the cash register screen. But he couldn’t go right now because Mark was coming over right now to play video games.
Nathan couldn’t control his super powers yet. When they were playing video games Nathan just disappeared and the video game controller was just floating there. Mark freaked out and went upstairs to see what happened. Nathan reappeared and went upstairs and told Mark that he was the N. He told Mark that the N stands for Nathan. Mark was really surprised that his best friend was his biggest enemy.
Later on that day M went over to the grocery store to use the evil M’s credit card. He got an apple and went over to the cash register and paid for it the credit card belonged to Mark his best friend. Now they both knew each other’s secret identity.
On Marks birthday he woke up and decided not to destroy Greeley but his dad was already about to let the green monster out. Mark went to the bank and robbed it then the N came. The M asked the N if he would help him kill the huge green monster. He said yes, where is the monster? They both went to go kill the monster.
When they got there the monster went wild and ate a lot of people including the evil D. He even ate some of the buildings in the city.
The M went to go shut the monster off and lever broke. So he had to fly inside the huge monster and shut it off from the inside. He did it but he got stuck on one of the buildings cement blocks. The N flew inside to try to save the M. The N picked up the block and flew it out of the monster. The M flew out of the monster right behind him.
Now the M and the N are both superheroes helping save Greeley.
The end
The evil Dad? Evil? Why does the Dad have to be evil? And what do you mean, “we all know what the D on the front of his shirt stands for . . . “?! What?! Are you trying to tell me something? Listen here, little guy, you’d better call your super-friends with their super-powers and their mysterious identities to come and help you, because the evil Dad knows where you live, and sleep, and he has a slimy, green monster in his power that will spew snot all over you. Or something like that. So there.
By the way, that was fun. Nice work.
Ben, what do think, is there the potential for great unrest brewing in Greeley? According to Wikipedia and news accounts there is strife and turmoil on the West Bank “The West Bank (Arabic: الضفة الغربية, aḍ-Ḍiffä l-Ġarbīyä) … “Since 1967, most of the West Bank has been under Israeli military occupation as what it calls the Judea and Samaria Area. A smaller part of the West Bank is administered by the Israeli civilian authorities as part of Jerusalem District.”
I an concerned because on the corner of 35th Ave & 20th St there is an enclave called “The New West Bank”, are my concerns justified, oh one of great wisdom?
Good story Ben! I really liked it:)